Your piece reminds me of one of the courses on writing. The tutor mentioned the DESCRIBE, not tell. He gave an example of:

The lady eludes confidence — that is telling, instead write:

‘’The lady walked majestically into the office, and everyone’s eyes raised up and followed her to her desk. She sat down, looked up, and smiled at them all’’

An avid reader. A lover of Nature as Nature is the language of God. Trust your intuition. It is always right. Email: lanu_bennett@hotmail.com

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